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I am a Shadow

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Though I am not much of a digital artist...actually, I'm no where close to being called a digital artist - I will try my best to write a fair critique for this splendid piece of artwork. Let me first say that I absolutely love your concept. With the sun's rays spreading out throughout the paper and the flow of the shadowy moon wolf, it's definitely very creative and aesthetically pleasing. But here is some details that I noticed and some tips that I would recommend to you.
When I first looked at this picture, I hardly noticed the wolf on to the side. The only thing that helped me realize that it is indeed a wolf was the eyes, they themselves were also a bit hard for me to notice as well. I'm really not sure if this was the style that you were going for, but if not then I would recommend you to add a bit more contrast between the wolf and the background (possibly by making the wolf a lighter shade of blue or by making the eyes a more piercing color like green or something). Also, this is just my personal opinion, but I think that the straight vertical lines at the bottom are kind of killing my vibe. What I mean is that while I was enjoying the flowy and graceful details of the waves (which I am absolutely in love with, btw) - the vertical lines kind of stick out a bit to much and when I finally reach the bottom of the piece, the mood kind of just dies off. I don't know, that's just what I thought.
But in conclusion, I find this piece to be absolutely lovely. Your originality and creativity are key points in this artwork, maybe a bit of work on your technique, but through and through it is very well executed <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title="=) (Smile)"/>

Phew <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>